小生没逐字逐句的翻译，在翻译过程中尽量揣摩了谈话双方的想法。所以汉语和英语并不是每个词都对应。
第122句的这个地方（but 'em Regulators are evil. ）由于不清楚死爪和Regulators组织的关系，所以译句有些拿捏不准，还望seanfx兄指点一二。
翻译不妥的地方还望海涵。
高手请不吝赐教，多谢。。。
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#{100}{}{You see a strong, stout man with a bushy beard.}
-{100}{}{你看见一个满脸胡须强壮的男人。}
+{100}{}{你看见一个满脸胡须的强壮结实男人。}
#{101}{}{You see MacRae.}
{101}{}{你看见麦克雷。}
#{102}{}{Hello Lad, what might you be looking for today?}
{102}{}{你好小伙子，今天你在寻找什么？}
#{103}{}{Hello Lass, what might you be looking for today?}
{103}{}{你好小姑娘，今天你在寻找什么？}
#{104}{}{Ai, What else would you be looking to know?}
-{104}{}{哎，你想知道些别的什么吗？}
+{104}{}{哎，你还想知道些别的什么吗？}
#{105}{}{Who are you?}
{105}{}{你是谁？}
#{106}{}{What can you tell me about the Blades?}
-{106}{}{你能告诉我关于利刃帮的事吗？}
+{106}{}{关于利刃帮的事，你能告诉我些什么？}
#{107}{}{Nothing, thanks.}
-{107}{}{没事，谢谢。}
+{107}{}{没了，多谢。}
#{108}{}{Well, I'm MacRae. I help the Blades some against the Deathclaws and that Regulator bunch.
# Teach'em a bit about protectin 'emselves against those nasties.}
-{108}{}{很好，我是麦克雷。我帮助利刃帮对抗死亡爪和那些管理者。教他们如何对抗那些下流胚的技能。}
+{108}{}{嗯，我是麦克雷。我帮助利刃帮对抗死亡爪和那些管理者。教他们如何在那些下流胚面前保护他们自己。}
#{109}{}{What kind of stuff do you teach them?}
{109}{}{你教他们什么东西？}
#{110}{}{Have you seen the Deathclaws?}
-{110}{}{你有看到死亡爪吗？}
+{110}{}{你曾经看到死亡爪吗？}
#{111}{}{What's the deal with the Regulators}
{111}{}{管理者有什么问题？}
#{112}{}{Can I ask you something else?}
-{112}{}{我能问你别的吗？}
+{112}{}{我能问你些别的事情吗？}
#{113}{}{Well m' specialty is fightin with my fists, and takin a punch or two more than
#the guy throwin 'em at me.}
-{113}{}{我拿手的是用拳头打架，我一拳就可以打倒一两个人。}
+{113}{}{嗯。。。我拿手的是空手格斗，在对方出拳打我之前，我可以更快的打出一两拳。}
#{114}{}{Sounds like a dumb idea, I'd rather use a gun.}
-{114}{}{听起来像是个馊主意,我宁可用枪。}
+{114}{}{听起来像是个白痴想法,我宁可用枪。}
#{115}{}{Do you think you could teach me anything?}
-{115}{}{您认为可以能教我什么？}
+{115}{}{你认为你能教我些什么？}
#{116}{}{Can I ask you something else?}
-{116}{}{我能问你别的吗？}
+{116}{}{我能问你些别的吗？}
#{117}{}{Well if that's how you be feeling, you can just turn yourself around and walk away.}
-{117}{}{很好，如果那是你所想的，你现在可以转身离开了。}
+{117}{}{好吧，如果你这么认为，你现在就可以转身滚蛋了。}
#{118}{}{You seem to be an alright lad, but me times busy with keeping the Blades schooled. If
#things were to straighten themselves, I might be havin the time then.}
-{118}{}{你似乎是个好青年，但是我正忙着教利刃帮。如果事情顺利了，我可能会有时间。}
+{118}{}{你似乎是个好小伙儿，但是我正忙着教利刃帮。假如你想问的问题不拐弯抹角的话，我也许有时间回答你。}
#{119}{}{Alright, can I ask you something else?}
-{119}{}{好吧，我能问你别的吗？}
+{119}{}{好吧，我还能问你些别的事情吗？}
#{120}{}{Thanx for the info.}
{120}{}{谢谢你的信息。}
#{121}{}{Seen em I have. Ran like hell, I did. If yer lookin for 'em, you'll find 'em over there.
#【MacRae points over to the east】}
-{121}{}{我看到过它们。如果看到它们，最好拼命地跑开。你会在那边找到它们。【麦克雷指了指东边】}
+{121}{}{我曾经见它们。当时我是屁滚尿流的跑开了。如果你想找它们，会在那边找到的。【麦克雷指了指东边】}
#{122}{}{I was thinkin the Deathclaws were the spawn of an unnatural act, but 'em Regulators are evil.
#Come once a month or so and they shows their ugly faces and drag a father away from is wee ones.}
-{122}{}{我认为死亡爪是非自然的产物，但是它们的管理者是邪恶的。他们差不多每月来一次，然后展现他们丑陋的脸并且阻止父亲靠近这些小家伙。}
+{122}{}{我以前一直认为死亡爪是非自然进化的产物，但是和它们一起的管理者是邪恶的。他们差不多每月来一次，到这里寻衅滋事，杀人害命，让弱小的孩子们失去父亲的保护。}
#{123}{}{Anything I could do to help?}
{123}{}{我可以帮你做什么？}
#{124}{}{Sounds bad, could I ask you another question?}
{124}{}{听起来不好，我能问你别的问题吗？}
#{125}{}{Thanks for the info.}
{125}{}{谢谢你的信息。}
#{126}{}{You be wantin to talk to Razor. A good lass if there ever was one.}
-{126}{}{你需要去和剃刀说话。她曾经是一个好女孩。}
+{126}{}{你也要和剃刀谈谈。她可的的确确是个好姑娘。}
#{127}{}{A good group of people is what the Blades are. Stuck ere between the damn Regulators and the
#Deathclaws ain't meant the happiest life for em, but they survive.}
-{127}{}{利刃帮是一群好人。在死亡爪和管理者之间为他们所谓的幸福生活战斗。}
+{127}{}{利刃帮可是一群好人。周旋于那些混蛋管理者和死亡爪之间，对利刃帮来说这并不意所谓着是他们最好的生活，但是他们还是顽强的生活着。}
#{128}{}{【MacRae claps you on the back】 Thanks to you, the Blades are going to live a better life. So,
#what can an old Scotsman do for ya?}
-{128}{}{【麦克雷在对你鼓掌】谢谢你，利刃帮将要得到更好的生活。那么老苏格兰人能为你做些什么？}
={128}{}{【麦克雷拍了拍你的后背】谢谢你，你的所作所为让利刃帮能活得更好。那么，我这个苏格兰老头儿能为你做些什么？}
#{129}{}{You had said earlier that if you had some free time, you could teach me a few things.}
-{129}{}{你先前说过如果有了一些自由的时间，你可以教我一些东西。}
+{129}{}{你曾经说过，如果你有时间的话，你也许能教我些东西。}
#{130}{}{What have you been doing lately?}
-{130}{}{你最近做了什么？}
+{130}{}{你最近干了什么？}
#{131}{}{What do you do around here?}
-{131}{}{你在附近干什么？}
+{131}{}{你在这儿干吗？}
#{132}{}{Not a problem.}
{132}{}{没问题。}
#{133}{}{Well it's been a wee bit quiet since the Blades helped out Adytum with the Regulators. Me
#teaching services haven't been in such demand.}
-{133}{}{自从帮助利刃帮对抗内城的管理者以后，这地区就稍微安宁了些。我的教学服务不能用在这方面上。}
+{133}{}{嗯。。。自从利刃帮帮助内城对抗那些管理者以后，这地区就稍微安宁了些。我所能提供的帮助也不是那么炙手可热了。}
#{134}{}{What do you teach?}
-{134}{}{你教什么？}
+{134}{}{你都教些什么？}
#{135}{}{Sorry to hear that, hope things get more interesting?}
{135}{}{很遗憾听到那些，希望事情能有转机吗？}
#{136}{}{Could you teach me?}
{136}{}{您可以教我吗？}
#{137}{}{Sounds interesting, but I gotta get going.}
{137}{}{听起来很有趣，但是我必须要走了。}
#{138}{}{Well I guess I do have the time. Might as well start right now. 【MacRae starts showing you some
#fighting stances, and ways to take punches like a true Scotsman.】}
-{138}{}{很好，我想我有时间。最好现在开始。【麦克雷开始摆出一些战斗架势，而且像一个真正的苏格兰人那样出拳了。】}
+{138}{}{好吧，我想我现在的确有些时间。也许我们最好现在就开始。【麦克雷开始向你演示一些格斗招式，以及如何像一个真正的苏格兰人那样出拳的方法。】}
#{139}{}{You be a quick learner. Hope that helps you in your travels.}
-{139}{}{你学得很快。希望能在你的旅行中帮助你。}
+{139}{}{你学得很快。希望你所学到的能在你的旅行中能有所帮助。}
#{140}{}{Well I used to be helpin the Blades out by teachin them a few things about protectin themselves
#against the DeathClaws and the Regulators. Now with you takin care of all that, things have been a wee
#bit on the boring side lately.}
-{140}{}{很好，我过去一直在教利刃帮防身的技能以帮助他们对抗死亡爪和管理者。现在由你去搞定一切，往后就会有点无聊了。}
+{140}{}{嗯。。。我过去一直对利刃帮传授经验以便他们能对抗死亡爪和管理者。现在由于你搞定了那些麻烦，我最近的生活开始变得有那么一点点无聊了。}
#{141}{}{Good seein ya.}
-{141}{}{很高兴见到你。}
+{141}{}{见到你很高兴。} |
发表于 2007-5-28 00:18:47
